In a land far far away from New Zealand, there were three fat pigs sitting on the old stone road by their mum house. Their mum said that they had to move out so they did the youngest pig start building by the river. The middle pig start renovated an old cottage and the oldest started building his dream house.
The youngest pig started to build his house out of old wood that was lying on the ground from the old cottage that was there 50 years ago the middle pig started to renovate the 1980s cottage and the oldest pig start from scratch and worked his way up then he put linea weatherboard on. The oldest pig wants to have a fireplace in the house so he could stay warm in winter.
The youngest pig was sitting out on his deck chair and a big fat chubby wolf. The wolf said come here little piggy the pig ran inside and locked the door and the wolf said I will burn this house down so he did the little pig ran to his brother's cottage and knocked on his door. His brother said, “come in.”
“Brother brother there is a wolf!”
The wolf came over and burned the wooden door the pig run out the back door and run to the oldest brother's house and the wolf followed then. They knocked on the door the older brother said, “come in”. The pigs said, “lock the door, there is a wolf!” so the older brother did. The wolf could not burn the door down so he left and got the heck out of there before the hunter came to look for him.
'm proud of this because I enjoyed it, I have fun writing this story.
I learn more about using speech mark and comers.
following up this piece of write ill try to use more speech mark and comers.